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Lit of the Week 71! *MattVoscinar, ~shebledgreenink and ~gummyrabbit 

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9 deviants said Promises Broken like BonesI often wondered if you ever noticed the moonlight
and the way it etched forever in your skin or the way
the lightning strikes that kept us from sleeping
showcased the space between our bodies. Your eyes,
ocean front property. I'll show the depths
of my distance if you promise to give me
nothing in return. I won't hold you to your word
but you'll keep it. I know that.

I'm sorry that I could not love you unabridged and holy like you were meant to be
and I'm sorry that I could not laugh off the bad joke my mother gave birth to
and I'm sorry that promises are easier to break than bad habits
and I'm sorry I couldn't stop playing hide and seek
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2 deviants said la bataille des femmesI'm not entirely sure how I got here. I'm looking at the door to one of those tucked-away meeting rooms in the student union building. When I met Terri on the bus last week, something told me not to take the violently pink flyer she produced from her bag, yet here I am.

I pull open one of the big doors and Terri and a couple other intimidating-looking girls are in there. I'm five minutes early. Surprisingly, none of the girls are wearing flannel shirts or combat boots or men's jeans, but they all made up for it with dramatic fashion sense, and only one of them lacks some kind of facial piercing. I've been in college for a while since my humb
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1 deviant said Untitled Poem LXIThere are three things,
Distinct, about this memory.

The first is that it was snowing as we crossed back in
Cold mountains on the border of California
Alpine. The sense of altitude palpable.

The second was the music,
echoing guitars, past generations,
Eyes to the west and opportunity. Welcome
they all said, to the Hotel California.

The third thing about the memory
was the way you looked, asleep,
Head resting on my legs.
    I felt an expanse within me
Love maybe, certainly trust.
Some hurt I had never thought of was healed.

Oh, perfect child! Oh, California
Oh movement and beginnings…

– My love will die out, I know
Fade, d

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Hello! My name is Boogieman900, but Boogie is just fine. I have been writing both prose and poetry for a number of years now and feel that I have managed to develop a talent for it over these years. In recent times I've felt as though my work has gone unnoticed in the literary community here and I feel by being allowed to post my art to your group I can hopefully change that. Here are what I feel are my two best pieces:
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If you cannot participate for the awesome prize pool, see the bottom of this journal for a possible reward.

A few days ago #Elocutionists received a huge helping of prize donations for an unnamed contest the likes and scale of which have never been seen on deviantART before. What is it, you ask?


It's a slam. A poetry slam. And it's Louder Than dA Bomb.



A poetry slam is a "no holds barred" spoken word competition. Poets are encouraged to alliterate, rhyme, shout, whisper, zing, compliment, parody, satirize, improvise, recite, quote, play with words and even sing if the opportunity arises.

For the longest time the #Elocutionists team have wanted to hear the roaring voice of literature, and this month we don't want to hear just any spoken word for a chance at prizes— NO! We want to listen to a writer's passion, emotion, and drive to keep being who they are; their inspiration to keep writing as they will and we want to hear you question and define yourself; who you are; why you are; to what you are. We want you to slam the conventional rules of writing and go all out to evoke a feeling of understanding of who you are to others in your poem.

Our poetry slam, dubbed 'Louder Than dA Bomb', will be held during the month of May. No days fewer. No days more than that. You will have until May 31st 11:59 PM UTC to compose and record a slam poem.


Record? What do you mean record?



It means find the nearest source of equipment that will record your voice, be it a phone, video camera or a mic and start practicing— those prizes aren't going to earn themselves. As the two videos show below, slam poetry is more than just writing a poem. It's about crafting a performance.





While we'd prefer the entries to not have visuals and be audio only, we understand the disservice this does to the overall performance. Therefore, video entries are allowed on the basis that the poet records themself and only themselves performing their poem. We will not accept picture slideshows or anything else of the sort. Video submissions will still be scored as if they were audio only, however, to be fair to all participants. All entries must be between 1-3 minutes long. Please do not add music or any other sound effects besides what you can vocalize. No props or costumes will be tolerated on video entries.


Do I just write about anything?



No. There is a theme for this slam. I was quite serious when I said we'd like you to define 'who you are.' But we don't want to hear what you look like or what your favorite band is. We want to hear you express yourself on a level that adds a whole new dimension to your deviantART personality.

The theme is

Self-Identity




I like the theme! But I have no idea where to start?



Don't worry. The #Elocutionists team will be giving their all to help anybody who needs it. Send a note to the group from our home page if you are unclear about any parts of the contest.

We'll be hosting a workshop chat event in our chatroom: #SpeakTheWords on the 18th free for anybody to attend. The focus of the event (held twice at two different times) will be to answer any questions about the contest or creating and performing a piece of slam poetry. There will also be opportunities for critique and feedback from #Elocutionists readers. More information will be announced at a later date through #Elocutionists and #CRLiterature.


But how do I get the audio onto deviantART?



You don't. Currently deviantART doesn't really support audio files, so files will need to be hosted offsite at places like soundcloud.com or blogs that support audio players. Once you have done this, link the audio in the writer's comments of your literature deviation (you will need to submit the text of your slam poem to deviantART and to the #Elocutionists' Louder Than dA Bomb gallery folder, which will be open shortly).


Rules



:bulletblue: Entries must follow the theme of Self-Identity and must be work written for this contest.
:bulletblue: Entries must be literature deviations containing the text of the slam poem with a link to where the audio can be heard.
:bulletblue: The performance of the slam poem must be between 1-3 minutes. If it is longer or shorter we will ask you to modify the poem.
:bulletblue: Video submissions are accepted (via a link to youtube in the writer's comments of the literature deviation) provided that the video shows the poet performing their piece.
:bulletblue: No music, props, costumes on any audio or video entries. While singing is allowed, it's allowed only in moderation and to illustrate points. We will not tolerate entirely sung pieces.
:bulletblue: Prize donors are allowed to enter the poetry slam as well.
:bulletblue: Entries must follow deviantART's rules for submitting literature.


How Judging Works



Judging will take place after the month of May has ended. Judging takes into account content, diction, but not how the poem is read on paper; rather, how the poem is performed. This means that even the most wonderful poem submitted can have an overall score that will suffer greatly if the poet rushes recording themselves and puts out a poor performance. It's important to take your time and practice your performance before submitting to the contest. Don't forget we will be hosting a chat event during May for the contest that will include feedback and critique!

Slam poetry has no set rubric for judging other than  a scale of 0-10. Judges are encouraged to give out the first and highest score they think of upon hearing the performance. Because of the lack of a rubric, judging works by dropping the lowest and highest scores and adding the three middle scores with the highest possible score being a 30. If someone scored the following:

8.9, 9.0, 9.2, 9.5, 10


then their score would look like this:

8.9, 9.0, 9.2, 9.5, 10


for a total of:

27.7


In the event of a tie for anybody who places, we will reach out to our volunteer judges to score the pieces.


Prizes



1st Place



:bulletwhite: 4500 points from ^NicSwaner, =DannyAnthony, `Angelles-LaVeau, *homunculus888, *lombregrise, *TheBrokenBride, ~SoulxMonkey, and *xlntwtch

:bulletwhite: a feature from ^NicSwaner, `IrrevocableFate, *rlkirkland, ~HuntingForHappiness, *SadisticIceCream, `vespera, =DrippingWords, *glossolalias, =HillsOfMyst, =DannyAnthony, =Wordeea, *Hfeather53, #FreeVersePoetry, *ezradeacon, *disrhythmic, =AzizrianDaoXrak, and *TheBrokenBride

:bulletwhite: a critique from ~HuntingForHappiness, ~SourAir, *dumbshine, *imaginative-lioness, and ^neurotype

:bulletwhite: Choice between an ebook copy of either of ~juniorel's novels: TITAN MAGIC [link] or CHEMISTRY [link]

:bulletwhite: Ebook copy of In the Shadow of the Mountains: A Book of Lost Knowledge by =QuiEstInLiteris [link]

:bulletwhite: Shane Koyczan's spoken word album Remembrance Year courtesy of =Lucy-Merriman

:bulletwhite: Any number of ebooks through Amazon.com OR smashwords.com with an order total remaining under $20 USD courtesy of ^NicSwaner


2nd Place



:bulletwhite: 2900 points from ^NicSwaner, :devDannyAnthony,  `Angelles-LaVeau, ^Beccalicious, *lombregrise, *xlntwtch, *homunculus888, and *riparii

:bulletwhite: a feature from ^NicSwaner, `IrrevocableFate, *rlkirkland, ~HuntingForHappiness, *SadisticIceCream, `vespera, =DrippingWords, *glossolalias, *lombregrise, =HillsOfMyst, =DannyAnthony, =Wordeea, *Hfeather53, #FreeVersePoetry, *ezradeacon, *disrhythmic, =AzizrianDaoXrak, and *TheBrokenBride

:bulletwhite: a critique from ~HuntingForHappiness, ~SourAir, *imaginative-lioness, and *dumbshine

:bulletwhite: Choice between an ebook copy of either of ~juniorel's novels: TITAN MAGIC [link] or CHEMISTRY [link]

:bulletwhite: Ebook copy of In the Shadow of the Mountains: A Book of Lost Knowledge by =QuiEstInLiteris [link]

:bulletwhite: Andrea Gibson's spoken word album Yellow Bird courtesy of =Lucy-Merriman

:bulletwhite: Up to 2 ebooks through Amazon.com OR smashwords.com with an order total remaining under $15 USD courtesy of ^NicSwaner


3rd Place


:bulletwhite: 1600 points from ^NicSwaner, =DannyAnthony, `Angelles-LaVeau, *lombregrise, and *xlntwtch

:bulletwhite: a feature from ^NicSwaner, `IrrevocableFate, *rlkirkland, ~HuntingForHappiness, *SadisticIceCream, `vespera, =DrippingWords, *glossolalias, *lombregrise, =HillsOfMyst, =DannyAnthony, =Wordeea, *Hfeather53, #FreeVersePoetry, *ezradeacon, *disrhythmic, =AzizrianDaoXrak, and *TheBrokenBride

:bulletwhite: a critique from ~HuntingForHappiness, ~SourAir, *imaginative-lioness,  and *dumbshine

:bulletwhite: Choice between an ebook copy of either of ~juniorel's novels: TITAN MAGIC [link] or CHEMISTRY [link]

:bulletwhite: Ebook copy of In the Shadow of the Mountains: A Book of Lost Knowledge by =QuiEstInLiteris [link]

:bulletwhite: Saul Williams' spoken word and music album Volcanic Sunlight courtesy of =Lucy-Merriman

:bulletwhite: Up to 2 ebooks through Amazon.com OR smashwords.com with an order total remaining under $15 USD courtesy of ^NicSwaner


Honorable Mentions (2)



:bulletwhite: 150 points from *homunculus888 and `Angelles-LaVeau

:bulletwhite: a feature from ^NicSwaner, `IrrevocableFate, *rlkirkland, ~HuntingForHappiness, *SadisticIceCream, `vespera, =DrippingWords, *glossolalias, *lombregrise, =HillsOfMyst, =DannyAnthony, =Wordeea, *Hfeather53, #FreeVersePoetry, *ezradeacon, *disrhythmic, and =AzizrianDaoXrak

:bulletwhite: a critique from *imaginative-lioness

:bulletwhite: 1 ebook through Amazon.com OR smashwords.com with an order total remaining under $5 USD courtesy of ^NicSwaner




To further celebrate this event we will be giving away a 3 month sub to someone (or a person of their choice) to anybody who comments below answering the following questions.


Who are you to people around you?
Who are you to yourself?



The best of luck to everybody who enters!
The #Elocutionists team.

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*ersatz-moon 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
...not so elite after all
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*toxic-nebulae 22 hours ago  Student Writer
Do you care to elaborate?
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*ersatz-moon 9 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
well the group name is elite literature but there's pretty much every self-defined writer as a member here
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*TristanCody Mar 18, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you all for the Lit of the Week nomination and award! I appreciate it so much! :excited:

Look forward to seeing some more works in the future,
Tristan Cody.
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~Cionie Feb 15, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Is there anyway we could receive a critique on deviations that are declined from the group? It would certainly help improve my writing :D
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^NicSwaner Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
You are always free to note the group as to why a piece was declined. As far as critique goes, it would be best to reach out to individuals (even our staff if they have the time) rather than just the group itself.
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~Cionie Feb 18, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Okay, thank you :)
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Mood: Joy *Blacksand459 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for including my poem in the Lit of the Week contest!! :D
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*VivaFariy Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Would you like to affiliate with :icondanightsofmystery:?
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:iconnawkaman:
Thank you for the Lit of the Week feature!
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